Comments : Monotony

  • 16 years ago

    by Amnah

    Hi Sourav,
    Thanks for taking your time to read my poem.
    Your poem is very good, in fact, its really excellent and i quite agree with you. So much monotony, that life is becoming duller by the sec. i really don't believe in 'Global' culture. Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This poem is very good. I like it a lot. Yes, I agree, they are all the same...unfortunately. :/

  • 16 years ago

    by Void

    Well done.
    Keep up the good work. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    You took nice topic of writing. and every true.
    well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    It is quite monotonous to have to see the same things day in and day out. I kind of related that there are so many people that are alike and it so difficult to find a genuine person now days. Fortunately there are some people that genuinely have hearts of gold.
    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by ArcadiaVera

    I really like this poem. Especially how it all starts with all r the same. Really nice poem!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    Is there anyone different? And little indifferent?
    Holding other perception, learning different tune
    Surviving this dent; brushing a new paint
    Insusceptible by this infection, ardently immune.

    I wonder that too...whether people different from this uniform wo rld are still there?...where is originality?? ....

    take care..
    wonderful poem...truly a beautiful message..touched my soul

    Isha

  • 16 years ago

    by Polly

    Although it felt like some words were missing in places, I really like this poem. The language is brilliant (had to look up a few words though, haha) and I like the repitition of 'all are the same', found it really effective at getting your point across. I really got the point you were making, great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Really good poem
    keep it up :)