Wow, this is kind of cool ;) I like this. Emotions...awww... *breathes them in* Keep on writing! :)

'Keep your blue eyes open,
keep your ears to the ground,
I'm looking for something,
I'm looking for a sound.
it's the laughter of a woman,
it's the moaning of a girl,
the smell of fresh roses,
come and rock my world.'

holy crap that's intense! Another astounding job...pure...I dunno. Great.

I love this. beautifully written.