Dear Venom

by Ares   May 21, 2008


Pull me down from my heaven of choice,
make me believe your lies,
shoot me with your eyes.

take my mind to your place of choice,
leave me in the woods,
abandon all my believes.

you call me a saviour,
yet you despise me,
you call me a lover,
yet you feel I'm trapping you.

undress me with your lie of choice,
make me beg you for it,
mistakes are made tonight.

take my mind to your place of choice,
leave me alone in cave,
calling for aid again.

you call me a saviour,
yet you despise me,
you call me a lover,
yet you feel I'm trapping you.

let me get a chance now!
lightning bolts strike as we kiss,
the skies above our love.
let me get a chance now!
a thunder every time we laugh,
about the silly things we do.

Poison girl won't you give yourself to me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Love love love it.

    I'd have to say this is my favorite part.

    "let me get a chance now!
    lightning bolts strike as we kiss,
    the skies above our love.
    let me get a chance now!
    a thunder every time we laugh,
    about the silly things we do.

    Poison girl won't you give yourself to me?"

    wonderful job.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    Love the poem its very good and i do think its a bit different too but really quite good...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    *swoons* beautifical! This one is a bit different...really quite good. Fabulous! There are a lot of lines that are really good. Only thing is it's 'beliefs' not 'believes' but, otherwise, really quite beautiful.