Wow this one of the most powerfull thing I have read in a long time it set me back in my seat idk what more to say but WOW thanks for sharing this poem with us 5/5

Tammi,

Wow this is really good

Wow...
this is super powerful and really good!

Some of the words you used in this write were not what I would have used. this is purely because I could not have made it work the way you did.
Amazing sentance structure. It was up and down. but I could picture the rythmn.

I've touched on something similar but yours is so much better :P mine never really flowed like yours.

Excellent work (Y) 5/5

Really liked this poem. This is about someone who is crying out for acceptance and wants the other person to see and understand the pain and hurt they have been through. Very good.