Fake

by The Black Rose   May 21, 2008


Facing the dream
the dream that cannot come true
for I am a loner
a loser and a coward

there's nothing left in this world for me
only darkness and depression
I see it in your eyes
I smell it in the air

the dream of being together
me and you
shall never come true
cos it's just a dream
and dreams are fake

fake, just like my life
like my friends, my happiness
fake, like a cardboard house
like my reality...
it's all fake...

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  • 14 years ago

    by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy

    Touching, you are a powerful writer! keep writing 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    I love you dont forget it , this peom sums up my,life atm

  • 16 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Touching and true

  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    Woow.. depressing =P
    Nice piece though, relatable for many peeps like you, if they exist.. =P
    One thing that annoys me cause I'm a pedantic shiz.. is that your I's should be CAPITALS!! Hoooofdletters!!!
    That's it =P

    Nice write, keep it up ^.^
    xxxxxxx

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