Woow.. depressing =P
Nice piece though, relatable for many peeps like you, if they exist.. =P
One thing that annoys me cause I'm a pedantic shiz.. is that your I's should be CAPITALS!! Hoooofdletters!!!
That's it =P

Nice write, keep it up ^.^
xxxxxxx

Touching and true

I love you dont forget it , this peom sums up my,life atm

Touching, you are a powerful writer! keep writing 5/5!