I know what you mean on this one. It really builds up to the finale.

Dont think I am a jerk but I almost did this to my girlfriend her mom yelled at her for putting her arm around me and i called her and told her that i think it would be better if we could be friends so she doesnt get in trouble because of me but I am glad I didnt

This was an awesome poem! this is so true i hate win ppl think that they r doing something in ur best interest but often times it only kills u even more! very sincere, nice wording, i like it! keep up the good job. :-)

Great job :)