WOW! This is such an amazing piece of writing. From the start till the end it was written so well - like a story from a fairytale where all ends up well. Excellent writing from your side. Keep it up! 5/5

Amazing..! i really like ds.. its emotional in d beginning but wd a happy endng.. great poem! hope 2 read more great poems from yah,,:)

That was a lovely poem...

Keep it up

Best wishz... karan

I love ur poem. It's so well organized and it truely states what you ment.