Comments : Lost Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Elmonessz

    AWESOME!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    OMG! this poem was awesome. Really i loved every stanza. You have a lot of talent.

    I lost my heart sometime ago,
    In a place that does not end,
    Forgotten what to do and how to feel,
    My heart shall never mend,

    ^^^This was my overall favorite stanza. I can relate to what you're saying. Wow fabulous job. Please keep writing and check out my work if you like. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~