The Tide ((bittersweet goodbyes))

"Pure existance is nonexistant"

I think this is the most powerful line in the poem!

I love how its paradoxical, but so true.

It's amazing to see your poems!

Keep writing, and don't forget!
Sophie

Broken hearts bleed to live
--sadly, very true

I like the usage of vocabulary.
"Erosive calamities that shake us,
simply become forgotten on the lilac breeze
stalactites form into weary souls
and it yet it matters not"
-Beautiful words, just very beautiful.