Comments : The Tide ((bittersweet goodbyes))

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    I like the usage of vocabulary.
    "Erosive calamities that shake us,
    simply become forgotten on the lilac breeze
    stalactites form into weary souls
    and it yet it matters not"
    -Beautiful words, just very beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Broken hearts bleed to live
    --sadly, very true

  • 16 years ago

    by CalGirl

    "Pure existance is nonexistant"

    I think this is the most powerful line in the poem!

    I love how its paradoxical, but so true.

    It's amazing to see your poems!

    Keep writing, and don't forget!
    Sophie