Oasis (Palindrome)

by Lonely Rider   May 22, 2008


Soothing and sparkling
Refreshing haven
Shimmering water
Reflected billows
Capricious sandhills
Scorching fireball
Date-Palms adorned
Oasis

****Mirror****

Oasis
Adorned Date-Palms
Fireball Scorching
Sandhills capricious
Billows reflected
Water Shimmering
Haven Refreshing
Sparkling and Soothing

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Very beautifull plainidrum , i lvoed it the meaning and the words
    blillows reflected, water shimmerning , jsut beautifull images , i loved it , you have jsut a very good way with words very unique ^_^

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Yes, indeed a very clever Palindrome.
    I loved your choice of words.
    It is a very difficult format, but you did it with ease:)
    Have a blessed 2009!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, what a wonderful poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good word choice. Great job on this form!

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Hey marvellous d napoleans way.......

    able was I ere I saw Elba.. I was inspired by this palindrom written in Sidney sheldons novel: The Doomsday Conspiracy n I stumbled across d palindrome poetry form... n I m writing one n its half finished n lucky me to read one from u....

    U have so much variety n u put each variety to proper use of words n writers like u can keep d different 100 plus variety of poetic forms both invented n existing tat came thru centuries.... All alive....

    Nice one again..

    Keep up the great work..

    best wishz... Karan