Hmm good poem!
but it is quite similar to the song 'One last kiss' by Madina lake

hope you wernt copying, haha ;)

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Hmm good poem!
but it is quite similar to the song 'One last kiss' by Madina lake

hope you wernt copying, haha ;)

4/5

Haha... Thanks for the comment... But I never heard of that song... really... :)

This poem is sort of sad, but sweet and dignified at the same time. it sounds like a letter, in a way. i like it =)

Wow i wish i could be strong enough to let go like that! Nice writing