Nice description on the fire, and what others think and say, I like how you write what the animals do and what all goes on.

"Animals begin panicking
Fighting to get away
Farmers fighting the heat
�rain please rain� they pray"

I like your rhyming, it all flows really well.
Just delete that "�" in that last line.

"As the danger grows rapidly
Flames engulf the town
I watched from the distance
As my home and town go down"

I love this, nice ending, really wowed me!

I dunno, it just doesn't read as a poem to me, more like prose.

I can't really give any advice on how to fix it, coz I can't really pinpoint what it is that just doesn't seem right, but...yeah.

I like the concept though.