Circles of perfect symmetry

'Fear and panic in the air, I want to be free from desparation and despair, and I feel like everything I sow is being swept away, well I refuse to let you go, I can't get it right!' it's nice to know what rhythm is playing in your head when you write these, it really helped me appreciate this poem much more. It's amazing! I like your spin on it, there's no getting around how much this is from you. Amazing!

Snow and confusion in the air,
a harsh reality,
don't be acting like you care,
because I know that it takes a bit of work,
to make this loving real,
I need to touch it to believe,
I can't touch a dream.
=> Beautiful!

I need to touch you everywhere,
I can't touch a screen.
=> Mmm... Interesting ;) Ver interesting indeed

Pretty poem. I like it.. :)