Alter Ego

by Lonely Rider   May 22, 2008


Mystery outlining the contour,
Angelic soul - none can devour,
Timid yet Invincible Attitude,
Crimson tears shed in solitude,

Black cascade of Rapunzel tress,
Reserved temper rarely frets,
Dancing feet slender built,
A smile that never wilt,

Contained emotion burst through,
Rhymic words expressed to few,
Ensuing inseparable shadow,
Omnipresent alter-ego.

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  • 15 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Line 5 "as Rapunzel's tress" Is a thought perhaps.
    Still the metre/rhythm disrupts the flow.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Amazing write! so thought provoking! wonderful metaphors you've used. so neatly constructed! a brilliant poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rinji

    This is very interesting it told me a story, but at the same time like wow I don't know how to explain it. I guess it was like my Brain just took to it congrads!!! XD

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    I can't remember the last time i tried reading a poem under miscellaneous category.It was nicely written, though the meaning is common still you manage to describe differently from the usual poems that i've read before. the emotion is vividly sad. keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Tat was a grreat write like ur other writes..

    Keep it uip

    Best wishz... Karan

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