Death by guilt

by she   May 22, 2008


Air so thick I can hardly breath

This guilt too strong,
it's suffocating me

I fall to my knees, while coughing up blood

Gasping for air,
But finding none

Choking on past regret,
A burning in my lungs

Guilt tears through my insides
As i scream for dear life

Internally bleeding
As life slowly retreats

[needs improvement, please help]

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  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I think its really good...you just need to add on to it....keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow....are you ok monique?

  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    I fall to my knees, while coughing up blood
    gasping for air,
    but finding none
    choking on past regrets
    a buring in my lung
    fave part love it 5/5
    i don't think anything needs change on it
    but thats me (lol) this poem relates to me

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