I fall to my knees, while coughing up blood
gasping for air,
but finding none
choking on past regrets
a buring in my lung
fave part love it 5/5
i don't think anything needs change on it
but thats me (lol) this poem relates to me

Wow....are you ok monique?

I think its really good...you just need to add on to it....keep it up 5/5