Unforgiven

by XxHiis BooxX   May 22, 2008


The sky, burns like fire
my world comes apart
there you stand, just laughing,
laughing
cause you ripped out my heart

Slowly i'm giving in
my heart is black as coal
you've lefted me cold and empty
you've destroyed my very soul

So now i stand here screaming
my mind is lost in rage
my only wish is
for death to come
and end your life
like you did to mine

Yet, i'm living everyday
but without my soul
you have destroyed
again my only wish is
for death to come
so i can turn the page

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  • 16 years ago

    by CYNTHiA

    Wow great i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    Good poem that I believe many can relate to.
    Rhyming and structure were also good and the message was clear so its a win =)

  • 16 years ago

    by LostInLife

    This is also a very good piece you can feel your intensity and emotions through your words!!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by rebel angel

    The guy i'm getting over was technically never mine...but this p03m....its brilliant and justs grabs you so that ur remembering all that pain again...but then u realize that you're not the only one going through this agony....good work...i'd like to read more of your work

  • 16 years ago

    by DaytimeStar

    Sweet love it vary kool yet vary angrey and hurtful KOOL!!! xD 10/5

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