Raining

by Happy With A New Start   May 22, 2008


I'm so happy it was raining
so happy cause you couldn't see my pain
no one could it just looked like the rain

but he could tell he could always
he took me out the rain
so everyone can see my pain

but yet the one that left me there still does not care
so till i see his face again I'll always want to live in the rain

never again will i love cause if i Chase this pain again
this time the rain may not come i may have to suffer
with girls going oh poor baby

and I'll have to tell them shut up beeeepppsss

cause the rain helps my spirit be set free

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  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    Good job. love the concept of the rain. maybe add some more detail but then again it might not need it.=]

    great job.

  • 15 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    Interesting and unique..
    good piece...

    maybe not so much of "THE RAIN" after a stanza.. .. just to keep it flowing a lil better..

    but other than that...
    nice..

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    I like the idea behind the piece but i know you can use alot more imigination with this peice hun other then then that-
    Raindrops 4/5