Close your eyes

by WaitAutumn   May 22, 2008


Look into her eyes as i once did
But say no

Unraveled secrets whispering through
A hidden crave to know them all
Maybe am i searching for the answers
Maybe am i trying to understand

Secluded as it was, you knew
I'm still lingering for the rain to fall
Submerge till forgotten what was hers
Wash away the stains of her hand

Erase everything, but omit what was true
Take from her grasp the bleeding heart
Sheath it before it burns out
Conceal my tears with the ones from above

Close your eyes, and look into
the drifting truth of a lonely heart
But don't plunge in without
Knowing you'll fall in love

-never believed in forever -

*** i've been trying to write this for a long long time! Trying to find the words to describe every feeling. ^^' kind of hard... ANY comment would be sooooo appreciated !! thaanks n_n ***

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    This poem was truly beautiful.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    This poem is really great and wonderful..the way u wrote it was so simple and touchable..good work:)..

  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Lovely

    Loved it! very nice.... 5/5! Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by such a catastrophe

    Very nice. i like it