by Kyle May 23, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
"Her",alot of things beutiful,her swagga,her hips,her thighs,maybe her smile,so unending it talks without moving,,still speaking her soul to me,not even that,her eyes,thats what gets me,something like a light for my tempo,pearls gleaming clearing darkness from my eyes,but not into sadness,already philosophy,her eyes like a stroy told in angles of my aura,claiming vast unfound feelings,that no other nigga could ever feel,and i bet "say lil mama" is all you hear,and see,but me,locking into your eyes,i connect mentaly,straining ghastly anger and emotion you envision,mixing it with mine,your eyes... |
I love it. words were beautiful . the flow was nice. nice done here. your emotion n feeling for this person it on this peom. the eyes for me are the most beautiful thing from any person. shows their true feeling. eyes cant hide behind the walls ppl put on. and i love this one. one of my favorite from urs. Keep it up! |
Wow! that poem is NUMER ONE this is so going on my fav list |
by homebound
Very powerful great work |