by Dying Beautifully May 23, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I see it in your eyes, |
I like the simplicity of this poem and the flow was really good. Good write! |
by Lady Nik
I like this. I think repeating "I Know" was a clever and effective idea. I love how simple this piece was, but I felt so much behind it. Very nice work hun. Keep it up. Nik |
This was great to. it flowed and expressed a lot.. Very well done. |