Dawn to Dusk

by Lonely Rider   May 23, 2008


Dawn to Dusk (Minute Poetry)

Crowing bird greeting the first rays
Azure display
Shimmering dew
Swaying bamboo

Scorching sun crowning midnoon blue
Dusty milieu
Summer heat
Sizzling treat

Orange billows bedeck horizon
Rich creation
Silky moonlight
Enchanting sight.

*This is my first attempt... comments are welcome.. :)

**The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff.

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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Formed poetry is really beautiful and this piece has just proven that...you really are great with these forms. This one is a visual treat! Beautiful and calming.

  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    Wow! this is a great poem. full of vision and meaning. It really captivated me. thanks!

  • 16 years ago

    by Empathy

    For the format that you put it into, I thought it was a very intriguing read. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this piece. Your imagery was great and your rhymes never seemed forced. Excellent work!

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A very beautiful and touching piece of poetry. i liked the way you worded it and how it flowed so very wel together

    5/5

    Keep Writing, lovely
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    First attempt and the first success.
    Well done. YOu have an amazing
    way with your words. Keep up the
    wonderful work.
    You are now one of my favorites.
    <3Tay
    5/5

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