This is a great poem, but the caps locked is so distracting. When i read it, I'm yelling the words in my head. I would make it into sentences.

Also, I would change the abbreviations... UR to you're and GONNA C U to going to see you

I'll do it for you so you can see if you like it that way or not. You can just copy and paste if you do.

More Than A Year
It has been more than a year
Since I first fell in love.
I still remember
the look on your face
and the things that you said.
I wasnt supposed to talk to you.
I wasnt supposed to care.
You changed the way I am
and the way I act.
You took me by the hand.
You never let me go.
I was too shy to tell you
And you never told me.
You told your brother
and I did the same.
He didnt tell you
And he never told me.
I told him to tell you
but the last day I thought (doesnt make sense)
was the day I was going to see you
[I LOVE YOU BABY 6/23/7]