Trotured Soul

by XxHiis BooxX   May 23, 2008


Inside i'm lonely
Outside i'm lost,
I want to stop the torture
No matter what the cost,
The feeling of despair
Machting with the pain,
I need to stop the bleeding
Before i go insane,
The horror grows inside me
My pain is it thrill,
To be free from this course
Has always been my will,

"Okay i know it short but i could really think of anything else to put..so if you like plz comment my poems and tell me wat ur take on it...Plz and thank you..."

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  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    This one is very good cause of its nice rhyming scheme and also its deep meaning.

    Good work =)

  • 16 years ago

    by silent screams

    Omg i love this poem again i can totally relate and i think tht out of ur poems i've read so far this is the best, keep up the gd work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    To be free from this course
    Has always been my will,
    --fav. part
    good work

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