Dying in my dream

by lost soul   May 23, 2008


I suffer as I write,
I suffer as I scream.
I suffer in the night,
Because I suffer when I dream.

I feel pain as I write,
I feel pain as I scream.
I feel pain in the night,
Because I feel pain when I dream.

I'm desperate as I write,
I'm desperate as I scream.
I'm desperate in the night,
Because I'm desperate when I dream.

I'm dieing as I write,
I'm dieing as I scream.
I'm dieing in the night,
Because I'm dieing when I dream.

And as I write I suffer,
And when I feel pain I scream.
And in the night I'm desperate,
Because I'm dieing in my dream.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dat Messager

    That is straight up life. you had put the words down right that hot i feel you where u comin from lil mama u strong

  • 16 years ago

    by Dat Messager

    That is straight up life. you had put the words down right that hot i feel you where u comin from lil mama u strong

  • 16 years ago

    by Magicmistress

    That was good. Even I thought it and I'm not all for depressing poems. The words went together so well, like an ocean wave. It was brilliant.

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Awsome!
    the repeating phrases like that, just great!
    you have really neat style of writing

  • 16 years ago

    by desperately needing you

    Cute!

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