Wow that was amazing i liked it a lot! your a great writer

Cute!

Awsome!
the repeating phrases like that, just great!
you have really neat style of writing

That was good. Even I thought it and I'm not all for depressing poems. The words went together so well, like an ocean wave. It was brilliant.

That is straight up life. you had put the words down right that hot i feel you where u comin from lil mama u strong

That is straight up life. you had put the words down right that hot i feel you where u comin from lil mama u strong