Gone love

by Emily   May 23, 2008


The day we first met was wonderful
everybody knowing be would be
you always use try say iam beautiful
now i am remembering all the best
close my eyes all the memories flash
of when we were together and happy at last
you were always trying to give me lots of cash
do you remember the times in the past
all the things we use to do in the park
forever you will be in my heart and soul
we would hang out for hours until dark
now that your gone my heart is like coal
i thought you were going to be forever mine
when i met you i thought my heart was signed

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  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    I think this poem has a lot of good thought in it and emotion but it could have better flow/orginization
    good job
    keep writin
    4/5 =)