by Amber May 23, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Here I am laying on the ground |
Great work in the detail of this poem!! |
by Zara Baines
Just an idea: |
by she
Alot of emotion |
Claps* This would make a beautifully tragic song as well as a kick ass music video. Five out of five for sure. You did a great job. You have a very interesting writing style in the sense of how you stop in the middle of a sentence to show the rhyming words. I mean, I'm sure many read the poem incorrectly and stop at each line, but the trick is to keep reading with no stops, read it like a song. |
by HvN
Very deep and sad, keep it up! |