Comments : Perfection

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This feeling is completely indescribable.
    For once I feel alive.
    For once I am not dreaming.........

    This poem sure brought back memories:)
    I remember how it felt to be in love for the first time and how it felt when it was returned.
    You have captured that feeling in a beautiful way within this verse.
    Very sweet and loving:)

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Amazingly written!! very well expressed.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    Beautiful !!