One Wrong Turn

by Kristina Eby   May 28, 2004


I sit here alone listening to the beating of my heart
i did one thing wrong and everything fell apart
i made a mistake that coasted me my dream
i feel the intensity as my blood now flows downstream
my stomach feels as if it were hollow
i look around as i make a hard swallow
my heart starts to beat at a faster rate
as thoughts run threw my head knowing its to late
I'm so freezing right to the bone
i feel so sad and so alone
i made a wrong choice that changed my life
i may not be the same persons wife
I'm sorry god for what i did
and ill make you this one last bid
give me one more chance please
I'm now on my knees
ill make you a promise that i will forever hold
ill tell the ones i hurt what hasn't been told
no longer will i show my parents hate
i guess everything left is now up to fate
ill now close my eyes as i start to prey
making a wish that'll ill get another chance just one more day

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  • 20 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    Hey
    Your pretty good for someone so young. Try rhyming every 2nd line instead of every line. I think it would really improve the way you write. But over all i liked it. you should also try writing some unrhyming poetry, it's harder to write but it all the lines fit together better. Don't be offended by the creative critisism, It was a pretty good poem
    Luv,

    -Blue ^_~

  • 20 years ago

    by Emilia

    hi, I like your poem a lot..
    You have talent..
    Please check out my poems and comment and rate.. It would mean a lot to me..=)

    I gave you a 5-

    Hugs to you