The mythical or metaphysical characters are an excellent choice to describe deceptive romance

Wow, wow...
I love this, really, really do. When I read the title I thought that it would be cliche but this is totally mind-blowing. Every stanza is powerful and original, different from anything I've read before. You wrote so refreshing and amazing piece. The imagery within the whole poem is fantastic, so captivating. I like the atmosphere that you created, too. Overall, excellently written love poem, short yet endlessly effective.
5/5 from me

Wow. it was so short and simple but held so much meaning inside. i love it. an unforgettable piece. although, you used the word "meek" twice. i think you probably should only have used it once and used another word instead. but other then that, it was a brilliant piece

5/5

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

This poem touch my heart and you write it in a way makes me watch everything and i realy hate this man,nice flow and simple words,well done5/5

Wow! That was soo beautiful. I loved it and it is about my favorite subject - Deception. I don't know why it is; you can just write so many good poems about this subject, right?! And everyone can relate to them. So good job on this one!! 5/5

Horrible situation
good word choice
short but had so much meaning
5/5

Tht was fantastic emotions burned in the words i could feel feel the sadness eminating as i read it brought bck good an bad memories very strong word choice

Tht was fantastic emotions burned in the words i could feel feel the sadness eminating as i read it brought bck good an bad memories very strong word choice