WHERE'S HOPE??

I like it...... The vOcab and usage of wOrds is really goOd and perfectly bulid up a strOng imagery.

``Merel a silhouette of the dead land
--> Shouldn't it be 'MerelY...'?

DOn't really knOw what mOre tO say. I just like it. :)

5/5

You have a way of making short poems so powerful
the first sentence made me think it would be happy, but it had a twist
well done

You described everything so beautifully! I can honestly say that you're a good poet! I liked this poem alot. Great job. 5/5

Sweet short poem,and i see during my reading your poems that you got special talent and imagination,you paint every word with feeling color and i love this styel,5/5

A beautifully described sunset. it sent shivers down my spine. it was a bit short, but i still really liked it

5/5

amazingly penned

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~