This is just beautiful. I have fallen in love with your love poetry. It is just so awesome and you express your feelings so clear and well, and sometimes it's difficult to actually put on paper exactly how you feel. But, you did that great here. Um... I love the little part of repititon at the beginning and then you used the same lines at the end. That was excellent. The rhyming was just as amazing as the poem was itself. I looooved this piece. Oh, and by the way... You kind of made a error in your title. lol. Maybe you should switch that. :] I love love. Haha. It's something that is so easy to express. It's a easy topic. It's overrated, and so many people write about it, but you do a excellent job. This piece left me speechless. Excellent. 5/5. |