Awww omg this poem was wonderful. Very sad at the end tho.

But then he turned his face away
and slowly whispered into my ears
That he could never love me back
the way I love him..
"Never could he love me back
the way I love him..."

^^^THis stanza caught my heart. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

ANg pANget ng poems mu..joke

That was so sweet
really liked all it all just -ends- suddenly

**For a moment..
Hearts stopped beating..
Trees stopped swaying..
Crickets stopped chirping..
And the moonlight was fading
As the heavens started crying..**

everything just stops, life in a -pause-
well written n_n keep writing