Comments : Papercuts

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Geometry because my teacher used to cut. He told me all sorts of stories and this poem is for him.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Well... i dnt read much cutting poems... but still this one is good to read...

    'I rushed home and got out my razor
    I took a deep sigh and brought it down
    That small slice that was full of joy
    Content with this self-harm, I drowned'

    ^^when I read this stanza... i could feel the razor cutting my skin... i could feel the pain....

    overall a nice write...

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    This is such a sad poem but it came from a background of good writing style like the story seemed so "real" :) Great Work! 5/5