Comments : What Were You Thinking?

  • 15 years ago

    by love09 4ever

    I love this poem cuz i kno its true something about is related to my life!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    This was great, it had a good flow, but may i suggest a fwe things..

    *How did it feel to know I had to go?*
    This line was good but i think if you add THAT between know and I then it would flow a little better.

    *How could you think i dont love you?*
    And the same with this line THAT between think and I or you could rite..
    *How could you think that i didnt love you?*

    JUst my opinion, other then that its great. Well done.

    Keep it up!
    *Hunny*