This was great, it had a good flow, but may i suggest a fwe things..
*How did it feel to know I had to go?*
This line was good but i think if you add THAT between know and I then it would flow a little better.
*How could you think i dont love you?*
And the same with this line THAT between think and I or you could rite..
*How could you think that i didnt love you?*
JUst my opinion, other then that its great. Well done.