by slighte May 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The swing hung from the tree |
by P00ki3B3ar
I think it is beautiful and has a sense of passion in it, i gave you a five because the fact that i think it has heart into it good job! |
by H E Losey
I think you have a good story to tell here but it seems to jump over something into the second stanza.....perhaps I'm too old to see it. Also the metre is ? |