Comments : Bleeding Heart [English Sonnet]

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Show me your smile that can light up a room.
    Being with you is my version of bliss.
    Two diamond eyes that could shine through the gloom
    These are the things that I silently miss.

    this is my fav. stanza...
    Ur poem is really touchable...and I liked the way u wrote it and the way u expressed how u feel...good job...keep it up5/5