by Natalie
Wow Pete, this poem is tragic and speaks so much more than the words you use. I feel that this poem is about you pondering on the negative aspects of life and that it even expresses someone on the verge of depression. |
by gracey grey
Well, firstly i love this poem.Imagery is so good that I can picture one who is demented and absolutely dejected.It holds a lot of truth and I for one can totally relate to it.Very well written.Mixed with a lot of emotions.And I loved the line where you twisted the saying using "no" instead of "all".Keep writing. |
by Sourav
I really like this poem. It touched me... there's a deep sense of melancholy in to it... emotionally rich poem. Good job on this! |
Wow, this poem is absolutely stunning! The fluidity was seemingly flawless, and the way you used your words is truly inspiring. I was drawn in by the first stanza, and was intrigued more and more by each line. The unique way you expressed your feelings is so strong, tragic, sincere; your words are still resonating. |