Comments : Strength

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This well written poem reflects the natural survival of the fittest. You made your point well

  • Excellent illustration of survival. Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Well written..

    'If i know anything about life.
    Its that life's surrounded by survival
    in the end life's limited to strength
    weakness is limited to death'

    ^^ yes thats the truth of life... and so very well described...

    'In the eyes of a true survivor
    death is not an option.
    if you don't obtain strength
    take your weakness to your grave. '

    ^^ these are such powerful lines... very well written...i really likes the ending...the last line really makes an impact..

    wonderful write..
    keep writing..