Wow...truly amazing yet strong wordz...keep up great work! ^^
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Aw. good work.

I like those feelings and expressions...I like this kinda poems a loooooott..and u really did a great job n it...u r really talented.:)

Absolutely amazing! I LOVE all the emotion. Its so strong and you used such elegant words that it flows nicely but carries a deep meaning that reaches the soul. Thats one of the best poems I have ever read.

This is my favorite part:

And my body shall burn under the pouring rain
Rain of fire, fury for all those years gone in vain
Regret shall only bring me back the sense of shame
And feed my fake pride to this burning rage

Its amazing!