Staggers hurt too much to cry

by Fan Angeleo   May 24, 2008


Alone on a dusty road
lies untold yet to be heard.
Walk is the man who took
the keys, Staggered to
the car foot on the pedal
oh no! Help someone screams.
Another lost soul drunken and
drank to ease.

Couldn't be bought without so fake
Id's made it to death's door only if
too late. Fought unsure how to relate
this driver had taken another life not
great.

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I like this poem for you used a great tense of depth in your words and it rythmed which i think gives it more effect then with a poem that doesn't (in many cases)

    it tells a story and a very true and common story at that,
    nicely put forward