O.m.g this is soo sad, but i love it it shows how much you loved him and how much you cared also how much yourself was hurting! keep writen i love it! Cx 5/5

Its so sad!
It shows how alot of people feel... It was a great read!

I liked this poem overall. A few places were kind of rough; like a short line followed by a long line. I liked the innocence in the writing; it helped the general flow of the poem. Minus a few typos and the fact that every word is capitilized, its a nice poem.