Unshed Tears

by 2weak2smile   May 25, 2008


The tears i cannot shed,
The life i feel is so dead,
And all the words left unsaid,
Will mean nothing, is what i dread.

The sun sets on the hills,
The darkness does not kill,
The loneliness of this individual,
In the dark of night i still equal nil.

The moon rises into the night,
My happiness disappears out of sight,
The tears in my eyes, have no right,
In the darkness of this moons light.

I watch th stars explode in the sky,
As my tears all run dry,
On the cold hard ground i lie,
As my heart weeps, but, cannot cry.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow!!
    a beautiful write!!
    i loved it, the last stanza was amazing.
    it was a very deep poem, very truthful. i really enjoyed reading it.
    keep up the nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by SuperGalacticLoveChild

    Wow thats so deep and heart felt

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia

    As my heart weeps, but, cannot cry. <--- my fovorite line it depicts great imagery. =) I really enjoyed reading this!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jo Anna EL

    ""I watch th stars explode in the sky,
    As my tears all run dry,
    On the cold hard ground i lie,
    As my heart weeps, but, cannot cry""

    when i read this stanza i was like Wow that's deep! it was so awesome the whole thing. Keep writing i'll keep commenting...
    this poem is on my favorites and so are you.

    ~Jo Anna EL

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Every flowed very well
    nice riming n_n

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