by StandStill
For a first poem, this is wonderful. the imagery is pretty strong and the flow is good. i don't usually like this style necessarily...the exactness of the rhymes sometimes seem forced. but for the most part, good job on the technicality. |
Awesome work mate! I can really relate to the poem. Keep up the good work and i'll be looking out for more of ur poems ;-) |
There may have been a forced rhyme or two, but It wasn't very noticeable, and it flowed very nicely. Well done |
by WaitAutumn
Every flowed very well |
by Jo Anna EL
""I watch th stars explode in the sky, |
by Alicia
As my heart weeps, but, cannot cry. <--- my fovorite line it depicts great imagery. =) I really enjoyed reading this! |
Wow thats so deep and heart felt |
by Sora
Wow!! |