Oh that is so horrible...it brought a shiver into my body...sometimes U cannot even be safe wz the closest persons to u but it is too hard to b a Father that does so...U r really talented,I felt like I see the events in front of me..great job..keep it up5/5..
and thxx fr ur comment on my poem..Take care:)

Oh my garden! that was amazing, I had to lift my feet up off the ground as I was reading that, it was an extremely gripping and intense piece filled with emotions and amazing visual descriptions. well done!

Omg i could picture the whole thing! it was so vivid and horribly entrancing! great poem and magnificantly written..what else can i say? 5/5 it was fantabulous! :)

Wow...amazing...so sad but yet amazing. 5/5.

Wow..you really have a great mind!! and its amazing how you put words...

Wowwwww. I wasnt expecting this! Amazing job with this one. I would have to say that this is my favorite of the the four I RRC. The ending was that of something I dread, but at the same time, it is what made the poem so real and great. This happens every day and it is quite sad. Thank you for such a powerful, emotional, wonderful read. 5/5.

I have no words. :'(

This one has a very rhythmic feel when read. Great rhyme and word choices!

God bless,
~Forester

Very sad & raw well done my friend :)