Did You Invite Me?

This was well done and puts forth a good story without using too many words or taking up too much time. only thing i didnt like was the second stanza because the rhyming abab almost had close enough slant rhyme to seem to be aaaa. but the story was excellent and the ending was brilliant.
4/5

If love was universal order
could it fit inside a heart?
they say love has no border
we must choose to be apart

Good job

The continuity of your idea seems to hop about and your emotions appear to be leading you in this. Not really clear on second stanza's meaning In fifth stanza they are gone and in sixth they are back? This is as always just an opinion. I do think you could take another look at this and smooth it out so it is Very good.

Hmm..there's a jumping of ideas from stanza one to three but still its a nice poem (or it was just my thought who can't catch up with the flow??). the emotions are revealed intensely. good work

This poem is very understanable in some parts

But i think it's some parts in this poem i came to think were a little "Awkward"

Like.....
" I was angry and shaken
When you left me alone
I did feel so forsaken
And sadly on my own"

This I felt was very Awkward not the flow or anything just the wording

Like if i could suggest changing it to something like.....

I was angry and shaken, [this comma gives a pause right here]
When you left me alone
I did[take this 'did out] feel[change the "feel to felt" so forsaken
And sadly on my own

I think you should at least write it that way and see of you like it but i just wanted to let you know that [in my opinion]

Other than wording thing the poem was okay

Wouldn't give it a WOW! but's it's not a 1 It's more like a in betweeny! :\

I'm not trying to be mean just to be honest!

So i guess that'll be 3/5 for me