Comments : One Nights Mistake

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Awwww
    thats sad,
    is it true?
    5/5
    great poem, it showed alot of sad emotions
    i loved it
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    I love it. The flow is great and each line is filled with emotion. I love the way you expressed your emotions and I love the topic of this poem. ((Great job with the new style!!!)) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    I freaking told you it would be great i love the poem cale i really like it its very sad i love it and the four line thing worked for you great job
    a 5/5 it very much deserved it!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah Nicole

    Omg i love this poem it so true and sad i llove it ur reallygood

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Oh, I really liked this one! I lost my boyfriend and it was really hard on me, so I can really relate to this poem. I loved it and it made me really sad (but in a good way.)It's definitely going on my fave list! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Wow
    it must be so hard for her to deal with, but it is great that she has you to care so much about her because I know that it's hard to hear someone that you care about so much talk about another person and although it's hurting you you are still there for her. great great write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked this one cale!
    The flow was a tad off but fixable
    I think it was a really touching poem
    nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww.....this was really really sad!!

    great job, and keep writting.........

    <3 Aly

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow...this was such a strong poem. I really love the style and the flow was flawless. I love the imagery as well. This was such an emotinal piece. Very nice work hun. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Beautiful write...5/5